David_Parker Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Water falling from The sky will soon be freezing Sharpen your crampons! Quote
chucK Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Don't you think each of the lines should be a somewhat complete thought? Running on into the next line is definitely cheating. How about changing your first line to: "Water falling down" Then it would be way cool . Quote
chelle Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 The snow will soon fly Making the mountains all white Get ready to ski (edited to conform to ChucK's rules.) Quote
klenke Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Haikus are stupid Writers of them stupider Get lost you losers. Quote
marylou Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Snow fell last weekend Hot wind blew it all away Winter is trying Quote
David_Parker Posted October 18, 2003 Author Posted October 18, 2003 (edited) chucK said: Don't you think each of the lines should be a somewhat complete thought? Running on into the next line is definitely cheating. How about changing your first line to: "Water falling down" Then it would be way cool . Absolutely not. You're too anal. There's no cheating or rules (maybe guidelines) in poetry. Just shut up and write your own instead of worrying about mine. I certainly don't like all the poetry I read either! Chuck,shove your rules up your ass think about climbing leave Haiku to others Edited October 18, 2003 by David_Parker Quote
chucK Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Klenke, I think yours would be cooler if the last line was changed to "Shit! I are one two!" Quote
marylou Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Klenke is stupid uncreative peak bagger check it off the list Quote
bunglehead Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Kiss my big fat ass I'm with Klenke on this one Haikus are stupid Quote
chucK Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Oh gosh I'm sorry to have pissed on your parade Parker How's that! ? Quote
dberdinka Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Car, boat, bus and trail Sounded so simple at home Now a real headache. The town of Holden Scenic wonder of the hills Built on toxic dirt. Pleasant suffering Crawling through the slide alder Entering the wild. Citadel of rock towering into the clouds bigger than we thought. High on a north face Our minds travel somewhere else Time to go back down. Percaset pillows Seperate mind from body Laughter fills the woods. Camping in the woods Twenty hours which to pass It seems like forever. Lead, zinc and copper Elements of deadly brine Waiting in mine shafts. Happy Luthernans Frolicking in the mountains On a toxic mine. Quote
David_Parker Posted October 18, 2003 Author Posted October 18, 2003 chucK said: Oh gosh I'm sorry to have pissed on your parade Parker How's that! ? Chuck, go here: (or back to school) http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/#howtowritehaiku and never take me seriously! Quote
priapism Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Holy crap Darin that is one long haiku poem are you japanese? Quote
catbirdseat Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 dberdinka, that was most excellent. Quote
dkemp Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 catbirdseat said: dberdinka, that was most excellent. Yeah, thats great. Quote
pope Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Oh, how I long to bugger a furry little Bill in the heather. Quote
Beck Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 make way thru steep hills on rock and ice and snow,then- topping out! Glorious. I still want to see in blossoms at dawn, the face of the mountain god. Quote
Matthew Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Why do we each climb? Most for body mind and spirit. A wonderful goal. Why do we not climb? When "the man" keeps us working. Got to make ends meet. Life is way too short. The wisest course of action: Go take a sick day. Quote
EWolfe Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Haiku! Sounds like sneeze. Explosive thoughts written down. Bless You! A Tissue? Quote
Sargent_Rock Posted October 18, 2003 Posted October 18, 2003 Fall and winter argue Over coloring the rocks Snow wins, the sun waits Quote
Cpt.Caveman Posted October 20, 2003 Posted October 20, 2003 David_Parker said: chucK said: Oh gosh I'm sorry to have pissed on your parade Parker How's that! ? Chuck, go here: (or back to school) http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/#howtowritehaiku and never take me seriously! Oh so simply written and so well said\documented for a - "shut up" Quote
Dr_Flash_Amazing Posted October 20, 2003 Posted October 20, 2003 Crisp temps are coming; sending season has arrived! So what's your next proj'? Sportos in down coats Lining up for Magic Light Please take a number! Great hordes of gumbies! Who is next on Five-Gallon?! What a clusterfuck! Rockfall from Cocaine, gonna get someone someday; wouldn't stand down there! Grasslands this weekend full of unsubtle dopers toking in full view Zeb'/Zion ascents seem to be in vogue this Fall. From whence all the trads? This route is scary; I wish I had a stick clip. I may wet my pants! Hey you -- shit for brains! Next time, brush off those crux grips! You hosed my onsight! Do you want beta? 'cause I've got that route wired, and your sequence sucks. Too many cars here! Next time we'll show up early, and park much closer! Quote
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