marc_leclerc Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 I have a crappy grade in English class and I need to do really well on this English project. We're making commericials for random products... tell me what you think of my vid so I can make it better... constructive critisism please! [video:youtube]v=HPQMakbldbc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bug Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 "Dull, dull,dull,dull,dull," should be dull, not emphatic imo. The girl under the pit should spew pea soup. The climber should talk normally, like it's no big deal, like he is just too cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TamaraSlade Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 well I thought It was awesome..... great music Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bug Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 It was awsome. He asked for constructive criticism and I tried to provide it. Keep it up Marc. Good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TamaraSlade Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 ok well... im still not spewing peasoup ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sobo Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 I think that was an excellent suggestion and would be fuk'n hilarious! You'd prolly want to film it outside, though... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TamaraSlade Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 haha ya I don't think his mom would appreciate Pea soup all over her floor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bstach Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 Thats awesome, Marc. Brings back memories of the video projects I did in high school. My best was a piece on the life of midieval knights. The soundtrack included "Hair of the Dog" (Nazareth) for the jousting scene, "Knights in White Satin" (Moody Blues)for the credits and a hilarious chess playing sequence featuring the theme from "The Good, The Bad and The Ugly". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bug Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 My hs buddies and I did a freeze frame movie of us sitting on our buts and driving around the inside of the school like we were in race cars. It turned out pretty cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bug Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 ok well... im still not spewing peasoup ... Actresses are so neurotic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sobo Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 My hs buddies and I did a freeze frame movie of us sitting on our buts and driving around the inside of the school like we were in race cars. It turned out pretty cool. We did an extremely similar thing wherein we played Batman and Robin. The "car" chase scenes we did out on real streets were a h00t! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bug Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 My hs buddies and I did a freeze frame movie of us sitting on our buts and driving around the inside of the school like we were in race cars. It turned out pretty cool. We did an extremely similar thing wherein we played Batman and Robin. The "car" chase scenes we did out on real streets were a h00t! Yeah cool. But we weren't gay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sobo Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 Hey! We were ambiguously gay. There's a big difference... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pc313 Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 (edited) You mite want to take Speach 101,and lower the tone of your voice like say"Jonny Cash",have sex with the head of the english department,or if all else fails slip $200.00-$300.00 to the english instructor! But all and all the vids were a good rough draft..Hay at least your not from Stayton Or. i mean,"a" Good luck! Edited November 18, 2008 by pc313 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marc_leclerc Posted November 18, 2008 Author Share Posted November 18, 2008 awesome suggestions guys.. thanks alot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olyclimber Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 move to LA. slowly lower your expectations till you end up in a gay midget porn flick. when this becomes hip/ironic use it as a springboard to a bit part on desperate housewives as a pizza delivery boy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pc313 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 (edited) My hs buddies and I did a freeze frame movie of us sitting on our buts and driving around the inside of the school like we were in race cars. It turned out pretty cool. We did an extremely similar thing wherein we played Batman and Robin. The "car" chase scenes we did out on real streets were a h00t! In my senior year we took a mass media class for a english credit,3 of us who had been together since the 1st grade decided to make a super 8mm film, it starts out with the 3 of us walking of the school doors and getting in a 56 ford 2 door and leaving 200ft. posi burn out in front of the office, a few close ups in the car with intense looks,we had a dummy that looked just like me with a long blonde wig for my hair was half way down my back so i could shot the ford race by me on the back roads at 120mph.,then skiding to a stop and turning on to a dirt road by the river,next we built a big camp fire and pased around a big joint EZ Wide Rolling papers,more intense red eyed close ups,then out comes a fifth of Wild Turkey Whiskey and more close ups of us chuging it down untel it gets to me and i finsh it off with a big shit eating grin,then close ups their mad looks, bring in the stunt dummy in a run away stance,with 5 glass bottles of ketchup in it, out comes two shot guns and then they unload on it,i film 25ft back as the head on the dummy explodes in a red cloud, real sick shit,they high five get back in the ford and drive away on the dirt road,next i film them turning back on to the main road, more intense close ups, then big posi burn out.THE END We called it "Cass of 76" When we played it in class with the song "Born To Be Wild" there was some up set girls in the class!! We got a "b-" Fucking Cridics (We left the dummy at the river)The only prop was the dummy! Edited November 18, 2008 by pc313 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sobo Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 English Class Mass Media Elective grade: B- Norm's Spelling grade: F The way you put together a "sentence": Priceless! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pc313 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Hay,i'm no wordsmith,my Hyperlube is on the backburner! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sobo Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 you mean hyperbole? You crack me the fuck up, Norm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pc313 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Hyperbole then!Oh Oregon past a law and made 50 years old a Senior Citizen like 2 years a go. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doug Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 jeebus, was muffy reincarnated as pc313? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevbone Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 Marc, which one are you? The first guy to appear or the second? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marc_leclerc Posted November 18, 2008 Author Share Posted November 18, 2008 Marc, which one are you? The first guy to appear or the second? Im the guy in the black hoodie (2nd to appear) in comm 1, I get the girl in comm 2, and I am the climber in comm 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pc313 Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 jeebus, was muffy reincarnated as pc313? Don't know about the reincarnation thing,or Muffy? but i do miss spell a few things! I do very little writing,and have no spell checker on this computer,that and the fact my eyes have gone bad and i cant type wroth a fuck!! English class was not my thing!! Art,Math,History,Science,and Photography! Had to do all my English credits in my Senior year,and World History,U.S.History it sucked! But i'm shure if i hang out on cc.com long enough you bastards with your condecending aditudes,and your urber language will learn me with your sprayon!! I'm in for a storm and wearing Gortex,gotta love it!! Oh who the fuck is Muffy?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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