Whoa.....thats a pretty long question/sentence.
Yes, the sentence stumbles over an incorrectly placed preposition. (It's better written when edited to read "he does not share with a group" rather than "he does not share to a group".
Anyway, Kevbone, since you are responding to questions, why do you assert that nonsensical run-on sentences are the mark of goat-fucking dogs, bad English teachers, and libertarians?
Huh?
This is true spray.....first we talked about BB who was assassinated....then bolting.....now Jayb's run on sentence and misplaced ,.
Good times eh!